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Freeze by ~Love-Anita:iconLove-Anita:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Open


I never told you the words frozen on my lips,
The ones that would crack any ice,
Break any barrier
Even the one between space and time that
We would always talk about.

I never told you the things my eyes saw
That nobody else’s did
Like the way the sun hit your hair just right
And the way you felt
Even though I never really touched you
More than mentally.

I never told you about the feeling in my chest
The one that if it had a sound, it would be the
Flutter-flutter
Of butterfly’s wings,
Brushing softly against mock-blush cheeks.

You’ll never know
Because I’ll never tell you
Exactly how much
I love you.
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~maniasdoor Feb 1, 2009, 6:34:15 PM
Pretty much how I'm feeling right now.
I love your poems.
<3
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=caybeach Feb 1, 2009, 6:38:53 PM
Really nice!:heart:

--
Lynne

"Forever and ever, you'll stay in my heart. And I will love you forever and ever we never will part. Oh, how I'll love you. Together, forever, that's how it must be. To live without you would only mean heart break for me":heart:
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~Love-Anita Feb 1, 2009, 6:49:32 PM
Thank you :) <3

--
JELLYHEAD WHEATTOAST~!
[link] <--- Is mah babbeh <3
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~Love-Anita Feb 1, 2009, 6:50:01 PM
Thanks ^^ I hope you feel better :) I read your journalz n stuff but i dont really leave comments much :D

--
JELLYHEAD WHEATTOAST~!
[link] <--- Is mah babbeh <3
:iconcaybeach:
=caybeach Feb 1, 2009, 6:54:00 PM
You're welcome :aww:

--
Lynne

"Forever and ever, you'll stay in my heart. And I will love you forever and ever we never will part. Oh, how I'll love you. Together, forever, that's how it must be. To live without you would only mean heart break for me":heart:
:iconcattiq:
Mood: Longing ~cattiq Feb 1, 2009, 9:29:24 PM
Nnnnnnnnnnnnnnh
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~Love-Anita Feb 1, 2009, 9:29:49 PM
No! ^(^_^)^

--
JELLYHEAD WHEATTOAST~!
[link] <--- Is mah babbeh <3
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~cattiq Feb 1, 2009, 9:30:16 PM
Nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu. Bite me >.>
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~Love-Anita Feb 1, 2009, 9:31:24 PM
Nom.

--
JELLYHEAD WHEATTOAST~!
[link] <--- Is mah babbeh <3
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