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We’re livin’ here,
Back seat drivers
All of us can look back
But baby, you’re stuck

None of us can change the past
No matter how we feel
No man has found that magic hour glass
To turn back the sands
In a flash of color and memory

Baby, you’re fucked
Its just you and me now
And we’re both killin’ ourselves over this
Don’t you worry, the ride will all be over soon

Find your muse, honey
Coz we’re in for a long ride.
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Probably one of the most heartfelt poems I've written in a long, long time.

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:iconiamjimmie:
your words enthrall me

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"Being an actor's no different than being a rugby player or construction worker, save for the fact that my tools are the mechanisms which trigger human emotion." -- Kirk Lazarus
:iconlove-anita:
:) Thanks. This one really came from the heart... and the words sort of poured out of me. There was very little prompting, and I could almost hear it as music.

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JELLYHEAD WHEATTOAST~!
[link] <--- Is mah babbeh <3
:iconiamjimmie:
it works like that when its good

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"Being an actor's no different than being a rugby player or construction worker, save for the fact that my tools are the mechanisms which trigger human emotion." -- Kirk Lazarus
:iconlove-anita:
Yeah. I was in total awe. I can see why musicians love their music.

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JELLYHEAD WHEATTOAST~!
[link] <--- Is mah babbeh <3
:iconiamjimmie:
i know. its like that

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"Being an actor's no different than being a rugby player or construction worker, save for the fact that my tools are the mechanisms which trigger human emotion." -- Kirk Lazarus
:iconlove-anita:
Yeah :)

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JELLYHEAD WHEATTOAST~!
[link] <--- Is mah babbeh <3
:iconmikeyhubris:
Definitely one of my favourite works from your gallery so far, bursting with energy and emotion. You use the colloquial, conversational tone to great effect here, which is far more difficult to do than some people think. If these are the results when you throw your emotions out onto the page then do it at every opportunity!
:iconlove-anita:
Thanks :) It felt like a song

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JELLYHEAD WHEATTOAST~!
[link] <--- Is mah babbeh <3

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